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English authoring rules for Korean-origin device documentation

Internal standard for engineering and clinical staff drafting English source text that will go into an MDR technical file and a patient-facing IFU.

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About this documentThis is an internal standard rather than a device document, written for this portfolio to show source-text governance work. It addresses the patterns that most often cause rework at the readability and notified-body review stages.
Document
KIN-STY-0003
Revision
04
Applies to
IFU · labelling · tech file
Owner
Technical Communication
Base standard
AMA 11th ed. + house rules

1. Why this standard exists

English source text is translated into every other market language. An ambiguity in the English is reproduced in each target language and is usually found late, at readability testing or during notified-body review. Correcting it then means re-testing the IFU and re-issuing every translation. The rules below address the patterns that most often cause that rework.

2. One instruction per sentence

A procedural step contains one action. Where the source sentence joins two actions with a conjunction, split it.

Instead ofWriteWhy
"After cleaning the skin and confirming it is dry, attach the band and press the power button.""1. Clean the skin and dry it completely. 2. Attach the band. 3. Press the power button."Four actions in one sentence. A user who is mid-task cannot find their place, and a tester cannot verify which step failed.
"The device should be charged regularly.""Charge the device after every third session.""Should" and "regularly" are both unverifiable. State the interval.

3. Articles and number

Korean does not mark articles or plural number the way English does, so these are the two most frequent corrections at review. Two rules cover most cases:

  • Use the for a part the device has exactly one of: the power button, the charging port, the strap.
  • Use a on first mention of something the user supplies: "Use a lint-free cloth." Then "the cloth" thereafter.

4. Modal verbs carry regulatory weight

These words are not stylistic choices. Use them as defined and do not substitute synonyms.

WordUse forNever use for
shallA requirement in a specification or protocolPatient-facing text — use the imperative instead
mustAn obligation on the user where non-compliance causes harmA recommendation
do notA prohibitionSoftening to "avoid" or "it is not recommended"
mayPermission, or a possible outcomeAn obligation

5. Warnings state hazard and consequence

A warning that states only the prohibition fails review. Give the user the reason, because the reason is what makes them comply.

Rewrite patternWeak: "Do not use the device in water." → Correct: "Do not wear the band while bathing or swimming. Water entering the sensor housing can cause the battery to overheat and burn your skin."

6. Terminology is fixed, not varied

English style rewards variation. Regulated documentation does not. One concept has one term across the IFU, the labelling, the app interface and the technical file. The approved term list is maintained in the termbase and enforced at translation.

ApprovedDo not use
banddevice, wearable, strap unit, sleeve
sessionworkout, training, exercise period, programme run
healthcare professionaldoctor, therapist, clinician, physician
electrodesensor pad, contact, lead

Where the app interface and the IFU disagree, the app is changed to match the IFU, not the reverse. The IFU is the controlled document.

Standards applied

EU MDR Annex I §23.1(d) readability IEC 82079-1 §5 ISO 17100 (translation) ASD-STE100 principles

Authoring notes

This document exists because the expensive failure in a Korean device company is rarely the engineering — it is English source text that passes internally and then fails readability testing in Europe, after translation into eight languages. Writing the standard for the engineers who draft the source, rather than editing their output afterwards, moves the cost from the end of the cycle to the start of it. The article-and-number rule is included because it is the single most frequent correction, and the one native-English editors usually fix silently instead of teaching.